Creative Writing Samples

This month's creative writing submissions are about: Mothers

This month we are thinking about mothers. But that doesn't mean that those of us who don't have a close relationship with our moms can't participate. Some people have special relationships with older sisters, or aunts, or family friends - an important relationship with a woman in your life does not have to be biological! There are families with two fathers or a single dad - we'd love to hear from any of you who have something to say. If you had to describe your mother relationship with a song, what song would that be? Is it one that you wrote? Is it one that you have heard? What does it sound like?

Here's what some very creative SmartGirls had to say:

• I would choose Bette Midler's song "Wind Beneath My Wings." Not only is it a beautiful song but it is mentioned in the song "Did you ever know that you're my hero and everything I would like to be?" I would dedicate it to her! My mother and I share a very special bond and relationship and that's exactly how I feel about her. I have 6 older sisters and including me that makes 7 daughters for my mum and she showers us all with her love. She truly is a hero and many times I felt like I would fall down to the ground, she picked me back up and taught me how to be strong and to believe in myself and not to give up. I love her more than words can say and never does she ask for anything in return. She has incredible strength, patience and love and if I ever have a problem, she'll be there with me to help sort things out. Mothers are a very special gift and any special female in your life who does this all for you! So Mum, I love you and thank you! ~ Katie, age 18
  
  
• If I had to describe my mom with a song it would be "Bleeding Love" because everytime I hear this song, I think of my mom. Basically, the song is saying you cut my heart and it keeps bleeding love. It also says that no matter what, I will always love you and that's why the singer says her heart keeps bleeding love. ~ Cece, age 16
  
  
• I only have one mother. Sometimes we fight, sometimes we hang out together. But the fight keeps the bond between us stronger because I know, I really need her whatever my age is. Sometimes I wish I never had a mother like her. Sometimes I protest God: why did He give me such a monstrous mom? Sometimes it doesn't feel fair that I don't have a nice mother like my friends. But finally I understand. That's the way she shows me her love. Whether it's the wrong or right way, she just wants me to know that she'll always love me just the way I am. Maybe some day, when I have kids, maybe I will understand why I love my kids more than anything. Even my mother does not do it in the right way. She just wants me to know her LOVE to me... ~ Lollyta, age 17
  
  
• My mom is amazing. She's single and does almost everything on her own. When people ask if I was a super hero, who would I be I say my mom. She's strong, independent and totally smart. She may complain but I see why. I mean, she takes care of three kids while having a full time job (that she hates), and she just finished getting her Master's degree. If there is a more independent mom then they're lucky because the best moms are the ones who are role models. ~ Lilly, age 10
  
  
• My mom is so important to me. Sometimes I get mad with her because if I'm not following her, she always scolds me. But, at any rate, she's my mom. And I am very proud of her. The best mom in the world! ~ Gaby, age 12
  
  
• Mothers are rather unappreciated nowadays. To become one is to gain weight needlessly, lose sleep, and cling onto stress. They are disrespected and disobeyed. Whatever they do is "uncool" and Mothers' Day is basically the only time for them and them alone. We expect so much out of them and give so little in return. Is it fair to treat such a great woman this way? Do mothers not form the basis of a family, hold it together, and keep it in shape? So how can we even think about not listening to her? Is it fair to treat the woman who cleaned your DIAPERS for you this way? Is it fair to squeeze whatever possible from her and end up putting her in an Old Age Home when she is of no more use? I think not. Now, people are starting to have "Mom and Me Time," where they talk and interact and what-not. Yet for me, everyday should be spent in trying to please your mother. Every minute should be devoted to her comfort and happiness. Because, when you really think about it, no one (not even your BF!) loves you more than your mum. ~ Destinee, age 13
  
  
• Her strength is like an old oak tree, standing in its old field, its roots spread out all around the world. Her smile is infectious. It's like how you catch the flu to get a day off school, you catch her eye to see her pearly whites. Her voice is changing but always from the heart. She always has our best interests at heart. Her love is unrelentless, no matter what happens. She may have strength, charisma and a charming voice but in the end, love brings us all together. Black or white, tall or short, they love you and you can't live without em. It's your mum! ~ Sarah, age 13
  
  
• Mothers can be a pain but they do it because they care about you. She wants you to have a better life than she had. Your mother will not stop loving you if you pass on, she will always love you no matter what. She will always miss you to if you are not around her. She will never forget any memories you and her had. She will not be mad for a long time. She will forgive you no matter what happens to you or her. She loves you. Never forget she loves you forever and ever. ~ Irene, age 13
  
  
• There's a song called "Daughters" by John Mayer. And since this is about daughters, I think it fits us. ~ Heather, age 12
  
  

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